a challenge of plot writing...

found someone who dun really like "Secret".. he claimed that the show is too fantasy.. and i said it's a bit cliche with loopholes.. anyway.. then he said he can come up with a better story..

reminiscing [c=46]cloudie[/c]° † says (1:43 PM):
i can make a better story with simple english and extreme twists!

reminiscing [c=46]cloudie[/c]° † says (1:43 PM):
in less than 100 words too

reminiscing [c=46]cloudie[/c]° † says (1:43 PM):
meh meh see cow

reminiscing [c=46]cloudie[/c]° † says (1:43 PM):
cow see meh meh

reminiscing [c=46]cloudie[/c]° † says (1:43 PM):
meh meh dulan cow

reminiscing [c=46]cloudie[/c]° † says (1:43 PM):
cow eat grass

reminiscing [c=46]cloudie[/c]° † says (1:43 PM):
meh meh bash cow

reminiscing [c=46]cloudie[/c]° † says (1:43 PM):
cow die on grass

reminiscing [c=46]cloudie[/c]° † says (1:43 PM):
meh meh thought win

reminiscing [c=46]cloudie[/c]° † says (1:44 PM):
mrs meh meh come

reminiscing [c=46]cloudie[/c]° † says (1:44 PM):
mrs meh meh kick meh meh

reminiscing [c=46]cloudie[/c]° † says (1:44 PM):
muuu killed mooooo father....

reminiscing [c=46]cloudie[/c]° † says (1:44 PM):
meeeeeeeeeeeehhhhhhhhhhhhhhh~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~


how? look like daji isn't the end of my fag friends..